i think you mean "won't set them free" from the second and final chorus and i hear it now but it's definitely only audible in a few parts if even more than the one you're talking about. doesn't help me stop wondering if this even close to final quality.

depends on what they say

if they are fair - i will respect it

if they say "where's slash?", "14 years fro this?", etc. i will consider it non constructive

i wouldn't know

what's a scene release?